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Intruder Alert

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Literature Text

Somebody has chosen to trespass
Wailing alarms attest to that
They don't know which doors to bypass
Defenses shall crush them like a gnat

The breach made is insubstantial
Unbeknownst to them things are secure
Protocol makes things quite simple
Whether they're a thief or saboteur

Given time they shall be captured
Their evasion tactics won't work long
Surely they know they've been discovered
Was that their angle all along

Interrogations aren't ever pleasant
But an explanation must be withdrawn
On this their future is contingent
A conclusion is not yet forgone

Sensors brought news of the intruder
Putting the watch on high alert
It's a matter of time before they answer
Why was the risk worth the effort
This poem was a pain to put together, mostly because it took a lot longer to finish than I'd anticipated. But given the theme finding the correct language was a bit tricky at times as well. This poem doesn't come from anywhere in particular, I simply wanted to see what I create using this poem title. The result is a bit more strict and polished than what I was expecting, but all in all it's a decent poem.
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It is a pretty solid poem, from it's rhymes, to it's theme, to it's language, to it's structure. It's interesting how everything fits so neatly and how it paints so well not an image, but a setting and a point of view. And it's not often we see a poem revolvinga round a theme of fiction.
I got to say that, beign you, I kinda expected it to turn at some point to something more emotional, or revolving on some 'day-to-day life' issue, the theme of Intruder Alert sure gives room for that, but this one makes for a very interesting reading nonetheless. In that sense, was even kinda surprising!