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The fowl weather may suit your mood
Blackened clouds might have their way
When things look bleak we tend to brood
But it won't rain every day

Personal storm clouds block your sight
Every thought you think is blue
Dreary skies hold back the warm suns light
Sometime soon it will get through

If sunlight cuts through mourning skies
It's quite likely more will follow
Rainbows will smile if the sky cries
Brilliant warmth fills hearts so hollow

Biting rain may come back for a while
Jealous storms could hide the sun
Please don't let the raindrops steal your smile
If they do you'll come undone

Though the weather may not match your mood
You can be warmed from within
If you smile then black clouds may brood
Rain can flow down your thick skin
I've had to work the last few days out in the freezing rain, and it hasn't been fun. So I figured I'd take something from that and pour it into making a poem. It doesn't really have anything to do with working in the rain, but I like how it turned out.

I wasn't really too worried about line length in this one. I focused more on rhyming and the words I wanted to work with. I like the message this poem carries too, as it is more positive then the other poems I've been writing lately.

I'd love to know what you think. :la:
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AlienLazer Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2011
This is probably the most uplifting thing I've seen/read here in dA for a while. Thank you. =)
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AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks! :D
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Emotastic-chik5 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I loveee this sooo mcuh!!!. Especially the title, it's perfect! :heart:
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AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you! :D
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Emotastic-chik5 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Welcome =D
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isabellaswancullen Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Student Writer
This is just beautiful.
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:iconazialsilvara:
AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
Why thank you. :)
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ArwingAssultX Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011
Very nice!
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AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
:D
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Emotastic-chik5 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist Writer
I love the message and how you wrote this :highfive:
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