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So Far Away

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The evening brings my dreams to life
They always dance before my eyes
It hurts to see them come so close
Distance is something I despise

You are my biggest dream of all
But right now you're so far away
I'm always seeing your face everywhere
Someday I hope to make it stay

When I left my heart did not come with me
At all times I can feel it's pull
I can hear it's voice telling me to come
This dream of mine is beautiful

Late at night you walk into my dreams
Sometimes I'm not sure I'm asleep
Because it all feels real to me
There are times I'll actually weep

Being far away just feels so wrong
Inside I know I'm out of place
In time the distance won't be there
When I reach I'll actually touch your face
I went on a trip a little while back, and got back just over a week ago. I went to visit a woman I love more then life itself, and I had to leave to come back here. The distance was difficult before, but it's even harder now that I've actually been with her in person. It's hard being so far away, but it's something I've got to live with.

That is what gave birth to this poem. :(
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MagnusDrakken's avatar
Very nice work, David. It actually reminds me of a poem I wrote myself about a week ago, however yours is a bit more hopeful, I should say. How long until you two lovers can be together once again, if it's not too intrusive to ask? I do not pray, but if I did, it would be that the time passes quickly for you.