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The evening brings my dreams to life
They always dance before my eyes
It hurts to see them come so close
Distance is something I despise

You are my biggest dream of all
But right now you're so far away
I'm always seeing your face everywhere
Someday I hope to make it stay

When I left my heart did not come with me
At all times I can feel it's pull
I can hear it's voice telling me to come
This dream of mine is beautiful

Late at night you walk into my dreams
Sometimes I'm not sure I'm asleep
Because it all feels real to me
There are times I'll actually weep

Being far away just feels so wrong
Inside I know I'm out of place
In time the distance won't be there
When I reach I'll actually touch your face
I went on a trip a little while back, and got back just over a week ago. I went to visit a woman I love more then life itself, and I had to leave to come back here. The distance was difficult before, but it's even harder now that I've actually been with her in person. It's hard being so far away, but it's something I've got to live with.

That is what gave birth to this poem. :(
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MagnusDrakken Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
Very nice work, David. It actually reminds me of a poem I wrote myself about a week ago, however yours is a bit more hopeful, I should say. How long until you two lovers can be together once again, if it's not too intrusive to ask? I do not pray, but if I did, it would be that the time passes quickly for you.
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AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
How long? If it could be under a year then that would be fantastic.

The reality is I've got a lot to look into, and a lot to figure out. It's going to be interesting to say the least.
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MagnusDrakken Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
Best of luck, Sir.
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lexman Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012
That's not the worst thing - to be far away from your beloved... If your feelings are strong, distance will make it stronger. If weak - it will break them. What worse - is to be close in distance, but far with souls.
Good luck to you, man, and my best wishes! :)
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AzialSilvara Featured By Owner Jun 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Yeah, I know what you mean. I don't doubt my strength, it's just frustrating sometimes.

Thanks! :)
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