literature

Synthetic Emotions

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All that I feel has been made up of shards
Broken pieces of things I once knew
These unnatural signals now mess with my head
What was once red has now become blue

Everything that I see doesn't seem to be real
Though it looks right its just not the same
Maybe I'm just asleep and its all just a dream
Or did I grab something I couldn't tame

Artificial emotions have me coming undone
When I breathe all the air tastes like plastic
All the colors seem off and things just don't feel right
Every voice in my head sounds sarcastic

Is this some strange state I've somehow stitched together
Fragile thoughts now refuse to connect
Have I been blind so long I can no longer see
Will my own heart I have to dissect

If it all comes together I hope things will change
As I'd hate to live like a machine
Being numb to it all doesn't feel go for long
This blank state I could not have foreseen
Wow, this poem was a lot of fun to write. I had no idea what I was writing when I started off but it gradually came together over the course of the poem. Honestly, this one feels oddly mechanical and experimental. It just feels.. fresh.

Anyways, I hope you enjoy it. I'd love to hear what you think. :la:
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Stil-Life's avatar
wow, this is goood. :iconlaplz: I feel like this a lot.