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The Inner Thoughts of Tidus

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This is my story
It took me a while to understand that
Complaining won't change things for me
I really can't afford to cry

I'm stuck in a strange land I don't know
Full of customs and fears I cannot grasp
They think the toxin has screwed up my head
It's for the best that I play out my part

The islanders welcomed me kindly enough
But I can't help but feel out of this world
I have broken taboo for a woman I don't know
Unlike my father I can't walk away

I've noticed how they watch me with curious eyes
My words gave birth to suspicion and pity
And yet the summoner's gaze bores through my chest
When I catch her looking she simply smiles

It seems I've been enlisted on some kind of quest
The one man I knew just faded away
I've met few so inviting so I'm tagging along
Perhaps I'll be able to find my way home

Most of the others seem to think I'm quite immature
But I keep my real thoughts and feelings inside
I must admit that I'm excited for the adventure to come
Why does this lovely summoner stick by my side?

When the sun goes down the page will be turned
I dream of a Zanarkand so bright and alive
Though I'm homesick I don't mind this world so far
Maybe tomorrow they'll see things through my eyes
This poem describes what I think Tidus was thinking during his brief stay on the isle of Besaid. Obviously I've played the game multiple times.. but I feel there was more to Tidus then was shown during this period of the game. I believe he just played the part, and kept most of his inner thoughts to himself.

This poem portrays him as a young man who's been thrown into a new world. Which is exactly what happened with Tidus. I like to think I did a good job with it, so I hope you enjoy it. :)
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MECa3's avatar
You just made a poem about a vid game. Congratulations, you are a total geek. XD